When I started to write books properly (and
by that I mean finish them), I started to check the story from the point of
view of the hero or heroine. I’d go right through the whole story in the
mindset of the villain(s).
It changes everything – and it’s quite
addictive. They have a way of taking over your mind, the plot, the whole book, and completely distorting
the whole blinking series if you let them.
They are so much more fun. No rules apply.
Actually, that’s not true. There has to be a motive, a psychological quirk, or
whatever, but they break the social rules. And perhaps that’s the point.
I ponder literary villains from time to
time for inspiration. Shakespearean villains are interesting. There are several
PhDs in that alone. I say Iago, you say potato. Personally, I think Othello was
a naughty boy, too.
Agatha Christie's villains can be made more
chilling with the support of a great costume unit and David Suchet’s dark
imploring eyes, but I realised a little while ago which villains I prefer.
Forget Sir Jasper, or the butler, I find the Ripleys of this world the most
dangerous and exciting. He (and it’s usually he) is a chameleon-like charmer
who adapts to surroundings. And he/she has to win.
It’s not new, of course. I’ve come to
realise that a modest little book from 16th-century Spain featured the best
villain I’ve ever come across. Lazarillo de Tormes was a quaint little episodic
chapter book about a poor boy making his way in the world. Aah.
The trick is, you think he’s reasonable,
this poor starving orphan in need of a new master. As he works his way up the
system, dumping each new boss (without actually murdering them, as far as I can
tell), he acquires all their sins. It’s picaresque, creating a rogue as a
hero. But he’s not heroic. He’s a survivor, and has no moral conscience at all.
Booo. It’s also in the first person, which is clever, because it’s persuasive,
yet leaves out some incriminating details.
When I was scouting around for a new book
idea, I suddenly decided to try things from this type of perspective. Not an
out-and-out dark-souled demon, mwah-ha-ha, but a child who has to make do. And
Viktor Radislav was born. ‘Dexter meets the Borgias’ is the tagline in my head.
I don’t have nightmares at all about how he
has to bump off his rivals. Not a qualm do I feel when deciding which poison to
use, or which stiletto. Getting rid of the bodies is intellectually taxing, but not
disturbing.
I should be unsettled, but I’ve written so
many stories about so many do-gooders, saving various worlds (past, present,
future and imagined) from evil, I feel it’s time to exercise some alternative emotional
muscles.
Viktor ‘I’m a murdering bastard. Literally’
Radislav. Machiavelli’s Acolyte.* Well, I’m hooked. What will he do next?
*Shameless plug. Normally I wouldn’t, but a
villain would.
By Pamela Kelt
Oh, go on. Who's your favourite bad guy or gal?
Oh, go on. Who's your favourite bad guy or gal?
Pictures:
Edwin Booth as Iago
Patricia Cutts as Milady de Winter with Maximilian Schell as D'Artagnan from a 1960 television presentation of The Three Musketeers
I have a minor addiction for Alan Rickman playing baddies. I have watched Robin Hood, Prince of Thieves so many times, because I keep hoping that the infinitely preferrable Sheriff of Nottingham will win this time. He is so beautifully portrayed and so much more interesting. Why was he fostered out to a witch? What made him so ruthless?
ReplyDeleteHis slightly foreign but perfectly English-speaking villain in the Die Hard film had me enthralled too. I don't go for sweaty men in vests so Bruce Willis left me cold but the elegant, amoral villain... ooooooooh
Oh, I’d forgotten the dastardly sheriff. Rickman has the right sneer - which makes him so perfect as Snape, too. Actually, I’ve just remembered Richard Armitage as Guy of Gisbourne in the recent TV Robin Hood. Yum.
DeleteThanks for reading the blog and commenting. Much appreciated …
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Pam
Pam, you are so right when you say that it is important to see your manuscript through your villains eyes also! It makes for a much stronger and well rounded story when both the good and bad characters are given full voice.
ReplyDeleteI have a ya novel coming out this summer that is nothing but villains. King of Bad is about super villains and it was very difficult to walk the line between keeping them bad enough to be believable villains and also making them likable so the readers pull for them to succeed (in their villainy!? What?) I know, another shameless plug, which I don't mean to do, but the experience deserved to be shared for this particular post and my villains were all smirking at the opportunity.
Finally - Alan Rickman rocks the bad guy role. Love him.
Hi, Kai,
ReplyDeleteLove the title! And nothing wrong with a shameless plug from time to time. And you’re not the only fan of Alan Rickman!
Thanks for taking the time to read the blog and make a comment. Good luck with your bad guys.
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Pam
This is a great idea. My scenes are stronger when they come from my antagonist's POV. They do tend to take over, though, and they fight dirty!
ReplyDeleteWho doesn't love a villain?
ReplyDeleteMy favorite bad guy is still Dracula. Love the book. Loved all the movies.
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Red Sonja: She-Devil with a Sword
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Glamorous, too. Can't believe I forgot to include him ... I still like the old movies with Bela Lugosi.
ReplyDeleteIts like you read my mind! You appear to know a lot about this, like
ReplyDeleteyou wrote the book in it or something. I think that you can do with a few pics to drive
the message home a little bit, but instead of that, this is fantastic blog.
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